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Three pie charts demonstrate how water resources are being applied in 2 American territories and round the globe.

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Three pie charts demonstrate how water resources are being applied in 2 American territories and round the globe. It can be observed that water is consumed by homes in both San Diego and California whereas agriculture accounts for the sphere where vast majority of water is used In terms of San Diego County along with California State, residential water consumption is equal to 60% and 39% of total water usage. In stark contrast, a marginal 8% of the water goes to homes globally. The reverse trend is apparent while glancing at water consumption for agriculture purposes. This field calls for to utilize a massive 69% of global water, yet only 17% and 28% of water usage is noticed in San Diego and California respectively. Such dramatic distinctions are not observed when we compare the figures for water in industry. San Diego industry makes use of the same amount of water i. e 23 %, so does worldwide. However, the figure for California comprises 10% higher than those tendencies.
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resources are
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in 2 American territories and round the globe.

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is consumed
by homes in both San Diego and California whereas agriculture accounts for the sphere where vast majority of
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is
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In terms of San Diego County along with California State, residential
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consumption is equal to 60% and 39% of total
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water
usage. In stark contrast, a marginal 8% of the
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water
goes to homes globally.

The reverse trend is apparent while glancing at
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water
consumption for agriculture purposes. This field calls for to utilize a massive 69% of global
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water
,
yet
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17% and 28% of
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usage
is noticed
in San Diego and California
respectively
. Such dramatic distinctions are not observed when we compare the figures for
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in industry. San Diego industry
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of the same amount of
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i. e 23 %,
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does worldwide.
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, the figure for California comprises 10% higher than those tendencies.
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IELTS academic Three pie charts demonstrate how water resources are being applied in 2 American territories and round the globe.

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