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Changes in the town of Langley in the year 1910 and 1950

Changes in the town of Langley in the year 1910 and 1950 9QAKj

The given to maps demonstrate the change in the town of landley in the year 1910 in 1950. according to the given information in 1910 the majority of the space was covered with rows of town houses at the Western and and the middle of the map. however the houses hadbeen w completely demolished by 1950 but instead of that flat are built in the place of townhouses. furthermore factory work was converted into Sherman mansion. moreover the railway line and the railway workers cottages had been removed in 1910 and construct a park with waste land name Sherman Park which include separate childrens playing area where as new load called new land had introduced next to children's play area by 1950. In contact this three new stores had been erected along with new land road in South Eastern part of map. on the other hand laundry and cafes are also renovated next to the Sherman mansion. overall we can clearly see that the langley town developed into a urban City through the period of the 4 decade. the area was modernished extensively and recreational facilities were developed.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to maps demonstrate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the town of Possible spelling mistake found.LangleyLindley
landley
 in the year 1910 in 1950.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAccording
according
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 information in 1910 the majority of the space was covered
 with rows of town This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 at the Western Possible typo: you repeated a wordand
and and
 the middle of the map. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?however,
however
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
Possible spelling mistake found.had been
hadbeen
 w completely demolished by 1950 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
instead
 of that flat are built
 in the place of townhouses. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?furthermore,
furthermore
 factory work was converted
 into Sherman mansion. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?moreover,
moreover
 the railway line and the railway workers cottages had been removed
 in 1910 and construct a park with waste land name Sherman Park which include separate Possible spelling mistake found.children splayingchildren playing
childrens playing
 area Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 load called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 land had introduced next
 to children's play area by 1950.

In contact this three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 stores had been erected
 along with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 land road in South Eastern part of map. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand laundry and 'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 are also
 renovated next
 to the Sherman mansion.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
 we can clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the Possible spelling mistake found.Langley
langley
 town developed into Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 urban City through the period of the 4 decade. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 area was Possible spelling mistake found.modernized
modernished
extensively
 and recreational facilities were developed
. 