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The diagram depicts the production of black tea by two distinct methods such as traditional method and modern method.

The diagram depicts the production of black tea by two distinct methods such as traditional method and modern method. R0VEP
The diagram depicts the production of black tea by two distinct methods such as traditional method and modern method. To being with process, For making high quality rea, the tea picker picks only 2 top leaves and buds. Next, leaves go through withering, where first leaves spread on the rocks then air is passed through leaves to remove 60 percentange of moisture from them. After that, These leaves under goes two different methods. Firstly, in traditional method leave rolled and flatand to convert into power from which produces loose tea. Secondly, in modern method leaves are culting, tosing and Carling to make tea bags. In both process leaves released enzymes. In the next step, leaves go through oxidation or say fermentation where lives spread on tiles which produce enzymes colour of leaves from Green to copper. Finally, leaves put in to oven for firing and drying which creates a nice flavour and oroma. In this statge leaves lived with only three percent of moisture in them.
The diagram depicts the production of black
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tea
by two distinct
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methods
such as traditional
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method
and modern method.

To being with process, For making high quality
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rea
, the
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tea
picker picks
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only
2 top
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leaves
and buds.
Next
,
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leaves
go through withering, where
first
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leaves
spread on the rocks then air
is passed
through
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leaves
to remove 60
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percentange
of moisture from them.

After that, These
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leaves
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under goes
two
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different
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methods
.
Firstly
, in traditional
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method
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leave
rolled and
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flatand
to convert into power from which produces loose
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tea
.
Secondly
, in modern
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method
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leaves
are
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culting
,
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tosing
and
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Carling
to
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make
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tea
bags. In both process
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leaves
released enzymes. In the
next
step,
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leaves
go through oxidation or say fermentation where
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lives
spread on tiles which produce enzymes
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colour
of
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leaves
from Green to copper.
Finally
,
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leaves
put in to oven for firing and drying which creates a nice
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flavour
and
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oroma
. In this
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statge
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leaves
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lived
with
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only
three percent of moisture in them.
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IELTS academic The diagram depicts the production of black tea by two distinct methods such as traditional method and modern method.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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