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information about ages of population in 2000 and estimation for 2050 for two countries, Yemen and Italy

information about ages of population in 2000 and estimation for 2050 for two countries, Yemen and Italy G3JqB

The chart provides information about ages of population in 2000 and estimation for 2050 for two countries, Yemen and Italy. This chart demonstrates that in Yemen in 2000 a little more than half of the population were between 0 to 14 years old. While the projection to 2050 this number had a moderate fall, keep next to 40%. On the other side they had a minimum rise from people who are 60+. In 2000 the population who were the majority in Italy, was about 15-59 years old. The prevision shows us there will be a modest decline in 2050 and a considerable jump to people who are 60+. Yemen represents a little an increase for people who are 60+ in 2050, remaining almost stable. Whereas Italy represents a significant growth at these ages.

The chart provides information about ages of population in 2000 and estimation for 2050 for two countries, Yemen and Italy.

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 us there will be a modest decline in 2050 and a considerable jump to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 Italy represents a significant growth at these ages. 