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graph shows the age of the people of Yemen and Italy

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The pei graph shows the age of the people of Yemen and Italy within the 50-year timeframe in 2000 to 2050. This chart shows the changes in the population of YEMEN and ITALY countries for the 50 years from 2000 to 2050. . Tha middle-aged population of Yemen increased about 11%, and people of 60 years old increased about 2. 1%, and young populations before 14 years old decreased about 13. 1%. Italy's elderly population over 60 years old increased by 18. 2% and the population under 14 years old decreased by 2. 8% and the middle-aged population between 15 and 59 years old decreased by 15. 4%. Both countries are experiencing an increase in the number of seniors over the age of 60. The number of young people under the age of 14 is decreasing in both countries. The elderly population in ITALY is 8 times larger than in YEMEN.
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decreased by 2. 8% and the middle-aged
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decreased by 15. 4%. Both countries are experiencing an increase in the number of seniors over the age of 60. The number of young
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