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The diagram depicts the process of collecting rainwater for drinking in a town in Australia.

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The diagram depicts the process of collecting rainwater for drinking in a town in Australia. Overall, the process consists of five stages, starting with rainwater flowing to the drain and ending with running to the households needing to use it. The first stage is when the rainwater flows from the roof in to roof to the rain, followed by the movement into a water filter so as to purify the dirtiness, such as scum or soil in the water. After this stage is complete, the filtered water continues going into storage connected with water treatment. Having flowed to the water treatment, rainwater is got rid of harmful chemical substances. After the purification chemicals have been finished, the cleanest water passes through a long pump to people’s houses. Once this final stage has been completed, rainwater is ready for the use of drinking water.
The diagram depicts the process of collecting
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rainwater
for drinking in a town in Australia.

Overall
, the process consists of five
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stages
, starting with
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rainwater
flowing to the drain and ending with running to the households needing to
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use
it.

The
first
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stage
is when the
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rainwater
flows from the roof in to roof to the rain, followed by the movement into a
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water
filter
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so as to
purify the dirtiness, such as scum or soil in the
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water
. After this
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stage
is complete, the filtered
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water
continues going into storage connected with
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water
treatment.

Having flowed to the
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water
treatment,
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rainwater
is
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got
rid of harmful chemical substances. After the purification chemicals have
been finished
, the cleanest
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water
passes through a long pump to
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people
’s
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houses
. Once this final
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stage
has
been completed
,
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rainwater
is ready for the
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use
of drinking
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water
.

IELTS academic The diagram depicts the process of collecting rainwater for drinking in a town in Australia.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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