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The diagram depicts a two wheeled bicycle which is newly made in recent time

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The diagram depicts a two wheeled bicycle which is newly made in recent time. Overall, it is immediately apparent from diagram that It shows the assembled cycle With its several parts and tells the information about cycle. With regards, starting from front wheel of bicycle firstly, the tires are made of rubber with metal spokes wheels, on the upper side it covered with mud guard with set of brakes furthermore, on the top it provides handlebar With gear lever, speed meter and brake lever with long cables of brakes coming down and attaching with set of brakes Moreover, the bicycle have headlamp placing on the long bar which is holding the handle bar with tyre On the other hand, the frame attach front and back side of bicycle. In the middle of bicycle It provide a seat with the saddle respectively. Secondly, the backside holding a second wheel with mudguard. Wheel contain wheel hub which join the metal chain with two pedals it is a notched cog. That helps a person to move the bicycle while sitting on it.
The diagram depicts a two wheeled
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bicycle
which is
newly
made in recent time.

Overall
, it is immediately apparent from diagram that It
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shows
the assembled cycle With its several parts and
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tells
the information about cycle.

With regards, starting from front
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wheel
of
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bicycle
firstly
, the tires
are made
of rubber with metal spokes
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wheels
, on the upper side it covered with mud guard with set of
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brakes
furthermore
, on the top it provides handlebar With gear lever, speed meter and
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brake
lever with long cables of
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brakes
coming down and attaching with set of
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brakes
Moreover
, the
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bicycle
have headlamp placing on the long bar which is holding the handle bar with
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tyre


On the other hand
, the frame attach front and back side of
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bicycle
. In the middle of
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bicycle
It provide a seat with the saddle
respectively
.
Secondly
, the backside holding a second
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wheel
with mudguard.
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Wheel
contain
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wheel
hub which
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join
the metal chain with two pedals it is a notched cog. That
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helps
a person to
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move
the
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bicycle
while sitting on it.
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IELTS academic The diagram depicts a two wheeled bicycle which is newly made in recent time

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179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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