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The diagram compares the values of three American companies every five years from 1960 to 2000 and from 2007 to 2012.

The diagram compares the values of three American companies every five years from 1960 to 2000 and from 2007 to 2012. 968r7
The diagram compares the values of three American companies every five years from 1960 to 2000 and from 2007 to 2012. Overall, the value of Carsons LTD fluctuated over the period and the Farm Implements LTD did not start trading until 1980. As can be seen, the value of Greenacres LTD was the highest, from 2 billion dollars in 1960, then followed an upward trend and about 4 billion dollars in 1990. In 1995, it was dropped to 3 billion dollars and 2 billion dollars in 2000. However, the figure was increased and reached 4 billion dollars in 2012. Like Greenacres Ltd, the value of Farm Implements Ltd showed a rising trend, started at 1 billion dollars in 1980 and gained three times about 3. 5 billion dollars in 2012. The value of Carsons fluctuated from 1960 to 2012. It was alternated increase and decrease and generally showed an upward tendency. The figure began at 500. 000 dollars in 1960, then around 1 billion dollars in 1965 and then, it was at 1. 5 billion dollars in 1995. But from 1995 to 2007 the figures almost remained constants.
The diagram compares the values of three American
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every five years from 1960 to 2000 and from 2007 to 2012.
Overall
, the
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Carsons
LTD fluctuated over the period and the Farm Implements LTD did not
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start
trading until 1980.

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, the
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Greenacres
LTD was the highest, from 2
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billion
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dollars
in 1960, then followed an upward trend and about 4
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billion
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dollars
in 1990. In 1995, it
was dropped
to 3
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billion
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and 2
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billion
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in 2000.
However
, the figure
was increased
and reached 4
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in 2012. Like
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Greenacres
Ltd, the
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value
of Farm Implements Ltd
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showed
a rising trend,
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started
at 1
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billion
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dollars
in 1980 and gained three times about 3. 5
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billion
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dollars
in 2012.

The
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of
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Carsons
fluctuated from 1960 to 2012. It
was alternated
increase and decrease and
generally
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showed
an upward tendency. The figure began at 500. 000
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dollars
in 1960, then around 1
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billion
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dollars
in 1965 and then, it was at 1. 5
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billion
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dollars
in 1995.
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from 1995 to 2007 the figures almost remained constants.
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IELTS academic The diagram compares the values of three American companies every five years from 1960 to 2000 and from 2007 to 2012.

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