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The diagram beow shows the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008.

The diagram beow shows the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008. KVKP1
The diagran reveals the percentum of energy production genrated from different resources in four nations between 2003 and 2008. Overall, it is clear that the highest proportion of energy was produced from nuclear resources in all nations in giveb time span, except in Vietnam. It is apparant from the illustration, the significant amount of energy was produced from nuclear resources in New Zealnd, Mexico and Mercco, accounted at 79%, 53%and 70% respectively. In contrast, in Vietnam the nuclear energy did not use. The maximun energy was genrated from the fossil fuels in Vietnam, just above the total energy production. In New zealand, the 19% of energy was produced from fossil fuels, which 6% more s than in Mexico, no energy was produced from fossil fuels in Morcco. Probing further to hydro energy, the energy was produced from hydro in vietnam, was 25 times more than as in New Zealand, witnessed at 49%. there was a difference of 5% in the production of energy from hydro resources i Mexico and Morcco.
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resources in four nations between 2003 and 2008.

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produced
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Zealnd
, Mexico and
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Mercco
, accounted at 79%, 53%and 70%
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Morcco
.

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IELTS academic The diagram beow shows the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008.

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