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The bar chart below shows changes in the percentage of private car users in each country of the United Kingdom in 2012 and 2013

The bar chart below shows changes in the percentage of private car users in each country of the United Kingdom in 2012 and 2013 JVkOa
The bar chart compares the percentages of private car users in four different regions in six different nations of the United Kingdom in 2012 and 2013. It is clear that the percentage of private car usage rate in England was the highest in 2012. Besides, Wales ranked at the lowest point this year. By 2013, Scotland had taken the lead over England and the lowest belonged to Northern Ireland. In 2012, the percentage of private car in England consumed 6. 8% of the private car, about 7% higher than in Scotland. In Northern Ireland at approximately 5. 6%. Meanwhile, Wale had the lowest vehicle use accounted for just 5. 4%. In 2013, the proportion of personal cars was used for transportation in England and Wales as illustrated by decreases to 4%. There was a change, the percentage of private car usage rate in Ireland was the lowest at 4. 6%, behind Scotland at approximately 0. 4%.
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nations of the United Kingdom in 2012 and 2013.

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usage rate in England was the highest in 2012.
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point this year. By 2013, Scotland had taken the lead over England and the
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belonged to Northern Ireland.

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in England consumed 6. 8% of the
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, about 7% higher than in Scotland. In Northern Ireland at approximately 5. 6%. Meanwhile, Wale had the
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vehicle
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5. 4%.

In 2013, the proportion of personal
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was
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for transportation in England and Wales as illustrated by decreases to 4%. There was a
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usage rate in Ireland was the
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at 4. 6%, behind Scotland at approximately 0. 4%.
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