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The diagram below shows the steps in the hiring process at a large corporation. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

The diagram below shows the steps in the hiring process at a large corporation. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. 3L82w
The given diagram depicts information about different stages in the recruitment procedures at a large firm. Overall, there are many steps the company uses to evaluate the applying candidate and this process ends with applicants being denied a position or becoming an employee. At a first glance, those interested will initially submit their application to be considered for the job at the firm. After passing the application screening process, prospective candidates will have to attend the Initial Qualifying Interview. Management will then distinguish applicants into two groups - “meet the basic qualification” and “do not meet the basic qualification”. Candidates of the latter category will not be employed and the former will be further tested with the aptitude test, which they are either graded as passed or failed.
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different
stages in the recruitment procedures at a large firm.

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, there are
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many
steps the
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company
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uses
to evaluate the applying candidate and this process ends with applicants
being denied
a position or becoming an employee.

At a
first
glance, those interested will
initially
submit their application to
be considered
for the job at the firm. After passing the application screening process, prospective candidates will
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have to
attend the Initial Qualifying Interview. Management will then distinguish applicants into two groups
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“
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meet
the basic qualification” and “do not
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meet
the basic qualification”. Candidates of the latter category will not
be employed
and the former will be
further
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tested
with the aptitude
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test
, which they are either graded as passed or failed.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the steps in the hiring process at a large corporation. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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