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The diagram depicts the process of how instant noodles are manufactured before they get available in the market. The process is carried out in several stages, which has been elucidated below. Firstly, the flour is collected by the trucks, which is stored in the storage sailors. Then after, the stored flour is mixed with oil and water in the mixer machine. The mixture is passed through rollers where the dough is been made. Next, dough strips are formed. Dough strips are shaped as noodles discs in the next stage. Once noodles discs are formed, it then dried up by using cooking oil in it. Vegetables and spices are poured in the cup with the cooked noodles. In the end, it can be seen that cups are getting labelled and sealed by machines. This is how instant noodles are manufactured. To summarise, the flour is collected and stored, then dough is made, and from that dough, noodles are shaped and cooked. The prepared noodles are packed in the cup with other ingredients. Finally, cups are labelled and sealed.

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noodles
are manufactured
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before
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 available in the market. The process is carried
 out in several stages, which has been elucidated
 below.

Firstly
, the flour is collected
 by the trucks, which is stored
 in the storage sailors. Then after, the stored flour is mixed
 with oil and water in the mixer machine. The mixture is passed
 through rollers where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
is been
 made. Next
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 strips are formed
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
Dough
 strips are shaped
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs in the next
 stage.

Once You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs are formed
, it then dried up by using cooking oil in it. Vegetables and spices are poured
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
 with the cooked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cups
 are getting labelled and sealed by machines. This is how instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are manufactured
.

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summarise
, the flour is collected
 and stored, then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
is made
, and from that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are shaped
 and cooked. The prepared You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are packed
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
 with other ingredients. Finally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cups
are labelled
 and sealed. 