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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. m2Yxq
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing matches from peeling a log to packing the matches. At the first glance, it looks as if the process involves complex steps to obtain the output. Overall, various types of equipment are used to produce sticks and then these sticks are inserted into chemical tanks to obtain the characteristics of matches. To begin with, the manufacturing process begins with peeling a log using a blade and finely chopping the output. These are subjected to a tank of ammonium phosphate and then dried using a circular-rotating dryer. Interestingly, after the process of drying, the sticks are again sent to a hopper where the action of blower dominates. With regard to the storage of the sticks, the metal duct carries sticks and stores them in a storage area from where the sticks begin to move to an inserter. A long beaker positions all these sticks and at the end of the beaker is an inserter, which places the sticks vertically onto the belt. Surprisingly, the process of match making also involves a steel belt which allows for a smoother transmission of logistics. The vertically placed sticks are now dumped slightly into paraffin wax tank and chemical tanks and are then sent to the drying area using the same belt. The obtained matches are now collected at the end of the drying area and are sent for packaging section. Finally, it is noteworthy to mention that the process of making matches involves various equipment that prepare the sticks and dump the tip into various chemicals and dry them. The obtained matches are then packed in the packaging area.
The diagram illustrates the
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process
of manufacturing
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matches
from peeling a log to packing the
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matches
. At the
first
glance, it looks as if the
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process
involves complex steps to obtain the output.
Overall
, various types of equipment are
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used
to produce
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sticks
and then these
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sticks
are inserted
into chemical
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tanks
to obtain the characteristics of matches.

To
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begin
with, the manufacturing
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process
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begins
with peeling a log using a blade and
finely
chopping the output. These
are subjected
to a
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tank
of ammonium phosphate and then dried using a circular-rotating dryer.
Interestingly
, after the
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process
of drying, the
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sticks
are again
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sent
to a hopper where the action of blower dominates. With regard to the storage of the
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sticks
, the metal duct carries
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sticks
and stores them in a storage
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area
from where the
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sticks
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begin
to
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move
to an inserter.

A long beaker positions all these
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sticks
and at the
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end
of the beaker is an inserter, which places the
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sticks
vertically
onto the belt.
Surprisingly
, the
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process
of
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match
making
also
involves a steel belt which
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allows
for a smoother transmission of logistics. The
vertically
placed
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sticks
are
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now
dumped
slightly
into paraffin wax
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tank
and chemical
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tanks
and are then
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sent
to the drying
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area
using the same belt. The obtained
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matches
are
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now
collected at the
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end
of the drying
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area
and are
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sent
for packaging section.

Finally
, it is noteworthy to mention that the
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process
of making
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matches
involves various equipment that prepare the
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sticks
and dump the tip into various chemicals and dry them. The obtained
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matches
are then packed in the packaging
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area
.
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