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the maps illustrate current the southside, a shopping mall, and its further expansion. overall, at first glance, we can develop plans t created many

the maps illustrate current the southside, a shopping mall, and its further expansion. overall, at first glance, we can develop plans t created many wa1Gr
the maps illustrate current the southside, a shopping mall, and its further expansion. overall, at first glance, we can develop plans t created many differences; As per the plan, noodle shops, the playing sector, and cinemas will be removed to introduce various fashion and shopping stores. An additional entrance to the department are included in this planed THE PRESENT SOUTHSIDE OF PARK HAS A PLAY AREA FOR CHILDREN ADJOINED TO THE PORTION OF NOODLE SHOP AND CINEMA. THE east side OF the SHOPPING MALL is covered with the golf course and park. there is one main entrance FOR MALL. THE NORTH OF MALL IS AREA FOR SUPERMARKET AND TWO SEPARATE TOILETS FOR MALE AND FEMALE WHILE ON SOUTH, THERE IS A CAR PARKING zone AND A FITNESS CENTER, SITUATED ON THE LEFT SIDE OF CAR PARKING SLOT. ACCORDING TO THE PROPOSAL, SUPERMARKETS AND TOILETS WILL REMAIN UNCHANGED. IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION OF THIS REGION, A COUPLE OF FASHION STORES WILL BE CONSTRUCTED. APART FROM IT, THE SIGNIFICANT CHANGE IS, THE EXTENSION OF DEPARTMENT STORES, THE EXTENDED LAND WILL OCCUPY ALL THE AREA WHICH WAS PREVIOUSLY CONSUMING PARK AND GOLF SECTION. THE PARKING LOT WILL BE BE BIGGER THAN ITS EARLY SIZE, CONSEQUENTLY, THE FITNESS AREA WILL BE SCRAPPED TO INCREASE THE SIZE OF THE PARKING AREA. NONETHELESS, INSIDE THE MALL GIFT SHOP, A COSMETIC SHOP, AND A STORE OF SHOE SHOPPING WILL BE INCLUDED AFTER THE DEMOLISHMENT OF CHILDREN PLAYING FIELDS AND CINEMAS. THE CAFFE OF WEST SIDE WILL BE CONVERTED INTO INTO CENTER OF INFORMATION.
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southside
, a
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shopping
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mall
, and its
further
expansion.
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overall
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differences; As per the plan, noodle
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shops
, the playing sector, and cinemas will
be removed
to introduce various fashion and
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shopping
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stores
. An additional entrance to the department
are included
in this
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planed


THE PRESENT SOUTHSIDE OF PARK HAS A PLAY
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AREA
FOR CHILDREN ADJOINED TO THE PORTION OF NOODLE
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SHOP
AND CINEMA. THE east side OF the
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SHOPPING
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MALL
is covered
with the golf course and park.
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there
is one main entrance FOR
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MALL
. THE NORTH OF
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MALL
IS
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AREA
FOR SUPERMARKET AND TWO SEPARATE TOILETS FOR MALE AND FEMALE WHILE ON SOUTH, THERE IS A CAR
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PARKING
zone AND A FITNESS CENTER, SITUATED ON THE
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LEFT
SIDE OF CAR
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PARKING
SLOT.

ACCORDING TO THE PROPOSAL, SUPERMARKETS AND TOILETS WILL REMAIN UNCHANGED. IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION OF THIS REGION, A COUPLE OF FASHION
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WILL
BE CONSTRUCTED
. APART FROM IT, THE SIGNIFICANT
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CHANGE
IS, THE EXTENSION OF DEPARTMENT
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STORES
, THE EXTENDED LAND WILL OCCUPY ALL THE
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AREA
WHICH WAS PREVIOUSLY CONSUMING PARK AND GOLF SECTION. THE
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PARKING
LOT WILL
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BE BE
BIGGER THAN ITS EARLY SIZE,
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE FITNESS
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AREA
WILL
BE SCRAPPED
TO INCREASE THE SIZE OF THE
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PARKING
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AREA
. NONETHELESS, INSIDE THE
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MALL
GIFT
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, A COSMETIC
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SHOP
, AND A
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OF SHOE
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SHOPPING
WILL
BE INCLUDED
AFTER THE
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DEMOLISHMENT
OF CHILDREN PLAYING FIELDS AND CINEMAS. THE
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CAFFE
OF WEST SIDE WILL
BE CONVERTED
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INTO INTO
CENTER OF INFORMATION.

IELTS academic the maps illustrate current the southside, a shopping mall, and its further expansion. overall, at first glance, we can develop plans t created many

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