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The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. pRLQw
The given layout depicts the process of making olive oil from olives. According to the graph, the process begins with the collection of olives from olive tree. After that, cleaning of olive is carried out by rising In cold water and then pass it through belt for smashing. Furthermore, in third stage, olives undergo for smashing. However, the stones are removed by smasher and paste is used for next step. In which paste poured in bag that have small holes. Followed by pressing of bags and separation of water and oil. In last step, water is excluded and oil is stored for selling purpose. Overall, the manufacturing process of olive oil from olive carried out in 7 different steps. Namely, picking, washing, smashing, pouring, pressing, separation and final step storage and sale of oil.
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oil
from
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olives
. According to the graph, the process
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begins
with the collection of
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olives
from olive tree. After that, cleaning of olive
is carried
out by rising In
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cold
water and then pass it through belt for smashing.
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, in third stage,
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olives
undergo for smashing.
However
, the stones
are removed
by smasher and paste is
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used
for
next
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step
. In which paste poured in bag that have
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small
holes. Followed by pressing of bags and separation of water and
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oil
. In last
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step
, water
is excluded
and
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oil
is stored
for selling purpose.
Overall
, the manufacturing process of olive
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oil
from olive carried out in 7
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different
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steps
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, picking, washing, smashing, pouring, pressing, separation and final
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storage and sale of
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oil
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