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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 151OA
The graph gives information about consuming of coffee and tea and how people drink them in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, going to a café for coffee or tea is the most popular way of drinking in most cities in last 4 weeks except for Adelaide, while bought fresh coffee is the least used ways in all cities. According to the chart, people from Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart are the most likely to drink tea or coffee in a café, with more than 60% of them have been to one in last 4 weeks. The second popular way of drinking is buying instant coffee, which is chosen by considerably more than half in Brisbane, nearly 60% in Hobart, and nearly 50% in Adelaide. On the other hand, buying fresh coffee as a way of consuming coffee was only picked up by less than 35% of the population in Brisbane and Adelaide. Its figure is higher in Sydney with approximately 44% and in Melbourne with 42%.
The graph gives information about consuming of
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and tea and how
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drink them in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane Adelaide and Hobart.
Overall
, going to a café for
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or tea is the most popular way of drinking in most cities in last 4 weeks
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Adelaide, while
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bought
fresh
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is the least
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ways in all cities.

According to the chart,
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from Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart are the most likely to drink tea or
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in a café, with more than 60% of them have been to one in last 4 weeks. The second popular way of drinking is buying instant
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coffee
, which
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by
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more than half in Brisbane,
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60% in Hobart, and
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50% in Adelaide.

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coffee
as a way of consuming
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was
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picked up by less than 35% of the population in Brisbane and Adelaide. Its figure is higher in Sydney with approximately 44% and in Melbourne with 42%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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