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The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil form grain

The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil form grain 9yRp
The diagram illustrates how ethanol oil is produced from grain. It is clear that there are twelve distinct stages in this process, from the initial grain in the warehouse to the eventual production of usable oil and distillers grain. At the first stage after being stored in the barn, the grain is graded into fine dust through the milling process and then is cooked. Once it is ready, this is mixed with water during the liquefaction stage. Next, the mixture undergoes a fermentation process. Stage six of the process involves the distillation of this mixture, which separates the ethanol oil and the solids. The ethanol fuel is put into the barrel, which makes the end product: usable ethanol oil. After distilling, wet distillers grain is gone through the dryer and becomes dry distillers, which are ready to use for animal’s feed.
The diagram illustrates how
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ethanol
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oil
is produced
from grain.

It is
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clear
that there are twelve distinct stages in this process, from the initial grain in the warehouse to the eventual production of usable
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oil
and distillers grain.

At the
first
stage after
being stored
in the barn, the grain
is graded
into fine dust through the milling process and then
is cooked
. Once it is ready, this
is mixed
with water during the liquefaction stage.
Next
, the mixture undergoes a fermentation process.

Stage six of the process involves the distillation of this mixture, which separates the
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ethanol
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oil
and the solids. The
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ethanol
fuel
is put
into the barrel, which
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makes
the
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end
product: usable
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ethanol
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oil
. After distilling, wet distillers grain
is gone
through the dryer and becomes dry distillers, which are ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for animal’s feed.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil form grain

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