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The diagram illustrates the results of survey of a person's coffee and tea buying and drinking patterns in five Australian regions.

The diagram illustrates the results of survey of a person's coffee and tea buying and drinking patterns in five Australian regions. ywpl

The illustration demonstrates the outcomes of observation regarding an individual’s purchasing and consuming practice of coffee and tea in five Australian cities. Overall, what stands out from the chart is, Australian people used to prefer more to drink coffee and tea in the cafeteria rather than make it at home. Among the five cities, the majority of people of Melbourne go to café in order to drink coffee or tea, on the other hand, citizens of Sydney bought more fresh coffee and Hobart’s residence buy most instant coffee than the rest of the cities. Looking at details, nearly under 45% of habitant of Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks, while an average amount of the purchasing for this item declined to approximately below 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide. Purchasing rate of this product in Hobart just beneath 40 per cent. In terms of instant coffee, people of Brisbane and Hobart bought slightly more than half, however, roughly 50% bought in Melbourne and Adelaide. The most striking trend is the average of Aussie who went to a cafeteria for coffee or tea was accounted for the percentage of 58. Around 65% of Melbourne people went to a coffee house and similarly under two-thirds people of Sydney as well as Hobart been there, thus Brisbane and Adelaide followed by 55% and little short of fifty per cent respectively.

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