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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. 7eb3
The diagrams illustrate how water is supplied in Australia currently and in the future. As can be seen in the diagrams, the most significant change is the reuse of stormwater and wastewater. Currently, pure water from dams or storage goes to households, shops, cities and factories. Once being transformed into wastewater, it is sent to the water treatment plant and then treated with chemicals. After that, it is released into the river. At the same time, stormwater from the city goes directly to the river. In terms of the planning water supply system, at the first stage, the city is still receiving pure water from dams or storage. Nonetheless, wastewater and stormwater will be delivered to the water treatment plant to recycle these water, which make the final products: pure water. Next, the water will go back to the city and there will be no water that runs to the river.
The diagrams illustrate how
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water
is supplied
in Australia
currently
and in the future.

As can be
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seen
in the diagrams, the most significant
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change
is the reuse of stormwater and wastewater.

Currently
, pure
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water
from dams or storage goes to households, shops,
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cities
and factories. Once
being transformed
into wastewater, it is
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sent
to the
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water
treatment plant and then treated with chemicals. After that, it
is released
into the river. At the same time, stormwater from the city goes
directly
to the river.

In terms of the planning
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water
supply system, at the
first
stage, the city is
still
receiving pure
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water
from dams or storage. Nonetheless, wastewater and stormwater will
be delivered
to the
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water
treatment plant to recycle these
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water
, which
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make
the final products: pure
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water
.
Next
, the
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water
will go back to the city and there will be no
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water
that runs to the river.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

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