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The diagram below shows the process of manufacturing ceramic pots.

The diagram below shows the process of manufacturing ceramic pots. g5AYg

The picture reveals in detail the stages of how ceramic pots are produced We can easily observe that there are eleven steps in the ceramic pots process, beginning with collecting raw materials from the ground and ending with the complete product-finished pots. The process commences with raw materials are dug by a dig and are transported by a truck to the factory. At the factory, raw materials undergo a lot of states. First of all, they are crushed into power by a special machine. Afterward, they are mixed with water before pouring into moulds with model shapes. The moulds are dried in 4-6 hours and then become the assembled clay pots. In the subsequent step, the pots made in the previous one are put into an oven with high temporary at 1000 degrees Celcius. Next, these pots are colored and then are moved to a color firing machine before becoming finished pots, ready to be sold.

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are produced


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 observe that there are eleven steps in the ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 process, beginning with collecting raw materials from the ground and ending with the complete product-finished pots.

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, they are crushed
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before
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moulds
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moulds
are dried
 in 4-6 hours and then become the assembled clay pots.

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pots
 made in the previous one are put
 into an oven with high temporary at 1000 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
Celcius
. Next
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are colored
 and then are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a color firing machine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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pots
, ready to be sold
. 