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The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chars give information about employment pattern which include proportion of males and females in Great Britain. This percentages are divided into 2 subgroups as a manual and non-manual work. Overall, female linking with manual job are higher ratio than non-manual ones and the reverse is true for men. Firslty, woman who work in managerial and professional are stand in first rate, where it is true for men with 7 % higher(36%). Woman second preffered occuparion type is clerical which have huge differentiation in ratio for men. At least choosen job for female gender is craft or similiar type of work, where it is the third one for other sex. But, for both gender works which involve general laboures are slightest picked. In addition both for manual and non-manual employee numbers are almost equal to each-others.
The pie chars give information about employment pattern which include proportion of males and females in Great Britain.
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, female linking with manual job are higher ratio than non-manual ones and the reverse is true for
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with 7 % higher(36%). Woman second
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type is clerical which have huge differentiation in ratio for
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job for female gender is craft or
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both for manual and non-manual employee numbers are almost equal to each-others.

IELTS academic The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

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