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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regularly physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regularly physical activity in 2010. 0RL3
The bar chart illustrates daily physical activities of Australian people according to their gender and age in 2010. Overall, people train regularly were women in nearly all age categories in 2010. Share of people are everage in all fields. To look at the index of men, their biggest part is young generations who are 15-24 years old. 25-34 aged people made 42, 2% in 2010. 39, 5% of 35-44 aged people train regularly. 43, 1% of 45-54 aged people, 45, 1% of 55-64 aged people, 46, 7% of men over 65 trained regularly in Australia. In women field, their contribution is higher than men in all age categories except from 15-24 aged people which 47, 7% of women train regularly. 42. 2% of them were 25-34 aged women. 52. 5% of women train regularly were 35-44 years old.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regularly physical activity in 2010.

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