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the diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog
The chart illustrates the stages in the life of a frog. All in all, this life cycle is comprised of some stages from eggs to an adult frog. The process begins with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature frog, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a stage in which it changes to be a tadpole. Over the next days, the tadpole emerges front legs where the tadpole cannot breath. In the following stage, the tadpole has complete legs – front legs and back legs, starting to breath. The tadpole still has a fin, a long fin. When the stage in which the tadpole can breath on the land is complete, the body of the tadpole will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size. A tadpole’s state of being able to breath and having complete legs is the stage of being tadpole frog. The tadpole frog can live on both the land and the water, but the fin can still be seen. The final stage is being an adult frog, when the fin of the tadpole frog decreases almost disappear.
The chart illustrates the
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stages
in the life of a
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frog
. All in all, this life cycle
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is comprised of
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some
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stages
from eggs to an adult frog.

The process
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begins
with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature
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frog
, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a
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stage
in which it
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changes
to be a
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tadpole
. Over the
next
days, the
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tadpole
emerges front
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legs
where the
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tadpole
cannot
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breath
. In the following
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stage
, the
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tadpole
has complete
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legs
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–
front
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legs
and back
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legs
, starting to
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breath
. The
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tadpole
still
has a fin, a long fin. When the
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stage
in which the
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tadpole
can
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breath
on the land is complete, the body of the
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tadpole
will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size.

A
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tadpole’s
state of being able to
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breath
and having complete
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is the
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stage
of being
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tadpole
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frog
. The
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frog
can
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live
on both the land and the water,
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the fin can
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be
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seen
. The final
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stage
is being an adult
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frog
, when the fin of the
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tadpole
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decreases almost disappear.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog

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188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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