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Fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1997 to 2004

Fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1997 to 2004 2bDPA
The following graph describes the consumption of meat and fish in Europe during the time period of 1979 to 2004. The y axis represents the grams of food a person consumes per week. On the other hand the x axis represents the years in intervals of 5 years from 1979 to 2004. The graph shows us 4 different lines, each line represents a different kind of meat, those being: Chicken, beef, lamb and fish. While talking about the chicken consumption we can see that it has increased during the years, going from 150 grams per week to 250 grams per week. On the other side we can see that the meat consumption has been decreasing in these past years, the consumption has decreased a good amount of 100 grams since 1997, going from a consumption of 200 grams to 100 grams. Also the lamb consumption has been on the low with the same decrease of 100 grams as te meat consumption, going from 150 grams per week to 50 grams per week Finally the fish consumption has remained the same through the years.
The following graph
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and fish in Europe during the time period of 1979 to 2004.

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y axis
represents the
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grams
of food a person consumes per week.

On the other hand
the
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x axis
represents the years in intervals of 5 years from 1979 to 2004.

The graph
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lines, each line represents a
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meat
, those being: Chicken, beef, lamb and fish.

While talking about the chicken
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we can
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that it has increased during the years, going from 150
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per week to 250
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grams
per week.

On the other side we can
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that the
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meat
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has been decreasing in these past years, the
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has decreased a
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amount of 100
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grams
since 1997, going from a
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of 200
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to 100 grams.

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Also
the lamb
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has been on the low with the same decrease of 100
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, going from 150
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per week to 50
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Finally
the fish
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has remained the same through the years.
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