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The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected and converted

The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected and converted Qx6y
The goven process despite information about water purification from saved rainwater and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. There are various steps involved in this process. Firstly, when rail fall on houses this water had conserved in drains. After it, tgis water supply to waater storage take however drain water firstly filtered than supply to water storage tank. Then, stored water passed for water treatment. In this stage, various chemicals mix into water for purifying the water. On the other hand, after water treatment this water converted to drinking water. Lastly through pipes this pured water supply and clean water entered into houses in AustraliaTo sum up, it is clear that water passee into different stages for purification. Rain water had treated in different way at every stage
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process despite information about
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purification from saved rainwater and converted to drinking
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in an Australian town. There are various steps involved in this process.
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, when rail fall on
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this
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had conserved in drains. After it,
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supply to
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storage take
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firstly
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storage tank. Then, stored
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passed for
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treatment. In this stage, various chemicals mix into
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for purifying the
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.
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treatment this
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converted to drinking
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supply and clean
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entered into
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stages for purification. Rain
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected and converted

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