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the diagram below shows how potato crisps are produced.

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The diagram below demonstrates the process of making potato chips. Firstly, potatoes are rinsed by cold water. After rinsing, potatoes are given in a peeler machine to remove their skins and eliminate potato peels and starch. Then, the peeled potatoes are moved into a slicing machine. One next phase, sliced potatoes are gone to the deep fryer. The chips are cooked in the deep fryer, and then they are salted. After all these procedures, they are transported to the bag packer machine, which feeds chips into catch bags for sale. In conclusion, potato chips are come a several steps prior to they come to us
The diagram below demonstrates the process of making
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potato
chips.

Firstly
,
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potatoes
are rinsed
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
water. After rinsing,
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potatoes
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
in a peeler machine to remove their skins and eliminate
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potato
peels and starch. Then, the peeled
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potatoes
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
into a slicing machine. One
next
phase, sliced
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potatoes
are gone
to the deep fryer. The chips
are cooked
in the deep fryer, and then they
are salted
.
After all
these procedures, they
are transported
to the bag packer machine, which feeds chips into catch bags for sale.

In conclusion
,
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potato
chips are
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come
a several steps prior to they
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come
to us
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows how potato crisps are produced.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
104 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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