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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. L29K
The supplied process diagram shows data about how the production of quick noodles in industry. Overall there are many numbers of stages shown in the instant noodle manufacture process. It is clear that all stages of noodles making descibe in clearly in process data. It is clear from the data first step is storage of silos step and some flour has added in process. water and oil add in the mixer and mixing all participants in process. Now rollers starting the work and move mixer on the dough sheets. dough strips has require large space of process. It is work on automatic strips basis. noodles can distribute on different numbers of discs. Coocking noodles can done in lower belt. Also drying process can start to do and oil can put in the noodles. Also some amount of vegetables and spices both are put in the flow of the noodles. All are packing in a cups for easy to carrying purpose. Last stage of full making noddles process is stick lables on pcket of noodles and descibe the content of all nutrisions. Lastly seal of all packet can successfully done. Now full manufacturing instant noodles have perfectly finish and ready to deliver of packet of goods.
The supplied
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process
diagram
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shows
data about how the production of quick
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noodles
in industry.

Overall
there are
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many
numbers of stages shown in the instant
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noodle
manufacture
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process
. It is
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clear
that all stages of
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noodles
making
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descibe
in
clearly
in
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process
data.

It is
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clear
from the data
first
step is storage of silos step and
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some
flour has
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added
in
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process
.
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water
and oil
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add
in the mixer and mixing all participants in
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process
.
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Now
rollers starting the work and
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move
mixer on the dough sheets.
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dough
strips has
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require
large space of
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process
. It is work on automatic strips basis.
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noodles
can distribute on
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different
numbers of discs.
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Coocking
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noodles
can done in lower belt.
Also
drying
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process
can
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start
to do and oil can put in the
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noodles
.
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Also
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some
amount of vegetables and spices both
are put
in the flow of the
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noodles
. All are packing in
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a cups
for easy to carrying purpose. Last stage of full making noddles
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process
is stick
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lables
on
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pcket
of
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noodles
and
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descibe
the content of all
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nutrisions
.
Lastly
seal of all packet can
successfully
done.
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Now
full manufacturing instant
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noodles
have
perfectly
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finish
and ready to deliver of packet of
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goods
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Academic
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3 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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