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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. QNN1
The data provided in bar chart illustrates the proportion of residents who had habit of consumed and purchased coffee and tea in five different cities in Australia during the last four weeks. Overall, it is evident that all the given cities faced inclination during the given time frame. However, the degree of change was varied. On having a cursory glance at bar chart, it is clear that in the Sydney, the percentage of people who had been taken coffee and tea and purchased coffee and tea was accounted for 43%, 46%and 62% respectively. In the last four weeks, Brisbane had 34%people bought fresh coffee, approximately 53% purchased instant coffee and nearly 55% went to the cafe for having coffee and tea. Probing further, the people of Melbourne more prefer fresh coffee followed by instant coffee and went to the cafe for coffee and tea in the last four weeks which was attributed to 63%, 47% and 42% orderly. Noticeably, the minor differences can be seen in the preferences of went to the cafe and instant coffee by the Adelaide. In the Hobart, the proportion of people who preferred fresh coffee, instant coffee and coffee and tea in the cafe was accounted for 63%, 54% and 37% correspondingly.
The data provided in bar chart illustrates the proportion of residents who had habit of consumed and
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in five
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different
cities in Australia during the last four weeks.
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clear
that in the Sydney, the percentage of
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people
who had
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coffee
and
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tea
and
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purchased
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coffee
and
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tea
was accounted
for 43%, 46%and 62%
respectively
. In the last four weeks, Brisbane had 34%
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people
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bought
fresh
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coffee
, approximately 53%
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purchased
instant
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coffee
and
nearly
55% went to the
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cafe
for having
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coffee
and
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tea
. Probing
further
, the
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people
of Melbourne more prefer fresh
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coffee
followed by instant
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coffee
and went to the
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cafe
for
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coffee
and
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tea
in the last four weeks which
was attributed
to 63%, 47% and 42% orderly.
Noticeably
, the minor differences can be
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seen
in the preferences of went to the
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cafe
and instant
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coffee
by the Adelaide. In the Hobart, the proportion of
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people
who preferred fresh
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coffee
, instant
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coffee
and
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coffee
and
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tea
in the
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cafe
was accounted
for 63%, 54% and 37%
correspondingly
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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