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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The scheme illustrates the process of producing electricity by geothermal energy. Overall the process of the geothermal power plant includes 5 various stages, starting from the pumping down cold water, and finishing by process in the generator turbine. First of all the cold water is pumping down to the injection well. The whole way of water is getting 4. 5 kilometers below. The next step is when the cold water from the injection well goes through the geothermal zone with hot rocks. After these two phases water is getting to the production well, and pumping up to a condenser. Then, the next stage includes powering cold water by steaming in a generator turbine, and finishes with powering water by turbine and producing electricity.
The scheme illustrates the process of producing electricity by geothermal energy.

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the process of the geothermal power plant includes 5 various stages, starting from the pumping down
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, and finishing by process in the generator turbine.

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First of all
the
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cold
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water
is pumping down to the injection well. The whole way of
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water
is getting 4. 5 kilometers below. The
next
step is when the
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cold
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water
from the injection well goes through the geothermal zone with hot rocks. After these two phases
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water
is getting to the production well, and pumping up to a condenser. Then, the
next
stage includes powering
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cold
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water
by steaming in a generator turbine, and finishes with powering
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water
by turbine and producing electricity.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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