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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The schema illustrates the working process of geothermal energy which produce electricity. In general there are 5 stages in the diagram from the moment when cold water pumping down to process in a generation turbine. The first step is that cold water pumped down into the ground on 4, 5 km then flowed into the injection well where there is geometral zone(hot rocks), and after that comes to thirth process that calls the production well and at this moment hot water went up in the condenser, and after that hot water got in the steam and went up to general turbine where is process of powering by steam and charging by turbine and process electricity.
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of geothermal energy which produce electricity.

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in a generation turbine.

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pumped down into the ground on 4, 5 km then flowed into the injection well where there is
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that calls the production well and at this moment hot
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went up in the condenser, and after that hot
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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