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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. w9EY
The given table shows five various industries, including finance, food processing, manufacturing, tourism and oil, coal, gas percentage in Brazil in 2009, 2019 and 2029 Overall, despite the fact that all types of showings were decreased by 2019, and will decrease by forecasts, only the finance chart will increase over the period in question. Looking at the details, it can be said that the food processing and the oil, coil and gas bars had tiny showings in 2009 having only 10 and 25 percent below. But in 2019 their percentage will increase considerably to 20 percent in food processing and 30 percent in oil, coal gas showings. But although the fact that they had great showings in 2019, according to the forecasts it will have a considerable decline in 2029 with about 10 and 25 percent. Furthermore, the finance chart had an upward trend in 2009 and 2019 with 30 and 35 percent in question. Also, will have a rocket increase in 2029 to 40 percent below. Noteworthy the manufacturing chart had and will decrease significantly from 20 percent to 5 percent according to the table. But the tourism graph hadn’t changed much by time, in 2009 the percentage of it had 25 percent in question, but in 2019 will feel significant fall to about 20 percent and according to the forecasts would not change at all by 2029.
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five various industries, including finance, food processing, manufacturing, tourism and oil, coal, gas percentage in Brazil in 2009, 2019 and 2029

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, despite the fact that all types of
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were decreased
by 2019, and will decrease by forecasts,
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the finance chart will increase over the period in question.

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, it can
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that the food processing and the oil, coil and gas bars had tiny
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in 2009 having
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10 and 25
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percent
below.
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in 2019 their percentage will increase
considerably
to 20
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in food processing and 30
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percent
in oil, coal gas
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showings
.
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although the fact that they had great
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in 2019, according to the forecasts it will have a considerable decline in 2029 with about 10 and 25
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percent
.
Furthermore
, the finance chart had an upward trend in 2009 and 2019 with 30 and 35
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in question.
Also
, will have a rocket increase in 2029 to 40
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percent
below. Noteworthy the manufacturing chart had and will decrease
significantly
from 20
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to 5
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according to the table.
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the tourism graph hadn’t
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much by time, in 2009 the percentage of it had 25
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in question,
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in 2019 will feel significant fall to about 20
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and according to the forecasts would not
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at all by 2029.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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