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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The diagram illustrates production of ethanol fuel from a certain corn. Overall, the process involves nine stages in total, which embarks on from storing of a corn till the transportation of liquefied ethanol. To start from scratch, a raw corn is stored by people and crushed in a milling machine. The next step is done by the addition of the water; corn cooks for 4 hours and ferments for 48 hours, which is equal to 2 days. Following that, the separation process of mixture starts up. The fermented corn is divided into two by- products; solid and liquid. Subsequently, the separated liquid ethanol is moved in to purifying stage, which takes another 5 hours to purify liquid ethanol fuel, and afterward it is send to sorting. Finally, after purified ethanol fuel is sorted out, it moves to transporting stage which transports the liquid ethanol fuel.
The diagram illustrates production of
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ethanol
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fuel
from a certain corn.

Overall
, the process involves nine stages in total, which embarks on from storing of a
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corn
till the transportation of liquefied ethanol.

To
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start
from scratch, a raw
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corn
is stored
by
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people
and crushed in a milling machine. The
next
step
is done
by the addition of the water;
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corn
cooks for 4 hours and ferments for 48 hours, which is equal to 2 days. Following that, the separation process of mixture
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starts
up. The fermented
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corn
is divided
into two by- products; solid and liquid.

Subsequently
, the separated liquid
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ethanol
is
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moved
in to purifying stage, which takes another 5 hours to purify liquid
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ethanol
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fuel
, and afterward it is
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send
to sorting.
Finally
, after purified
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ethanol
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fuel
is sorted
out, it
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moves
to transporting stage which transports the liquid
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ethanol
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fuel
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

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