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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. J13j
Ethanol is been using in many ways, it is also known as liquid alchocol. Different ethanol production facilities use different feedstock and some of them are made on corn and wheat. On this diagram we can see how the Ethanol fuel is created from corn. There are six main steps in the ethanol production process. Firstly, they collect the corn going to storing room and then next to miling room. The next step is they add water to the corn and cook it for about four hours. After cooking they will wait for 48 hours to ferment the cooked corn. When the fermentation is done separation is the next process they separate the liquid and solid product, the liquid they collect will becoming Purifying Ethanol after 5 hours. Once they have the ethanol they can put it in a storage room and then ready for transportation. Some people, on the other hand, have concerns about using ethanol as fuel. For instances here are worries about the amount of energy and land required to grow ethanol feedstock crops. Even with these concerns, ethanol-based fuel is still an important alternative to fossil fuels.
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alchocol
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ethanol
production facilities
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feedstock and
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corn
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how the
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Ethanol
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fuel
is created
from
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corn
. There are six main steps in the
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ethanol
production process.

Firstly
, they collect the
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corn
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room and then
next
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room. The
next
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add
water to the
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corn
and cook it for about four hours. After
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cooking they
will wait for 48 hours to ferment the cooked
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corn
. When the fermentation
is done
separation is the
next
process they separate the liquid and solid product, the liquid they collect will becoming Purifying
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Ethanol
after 5 hours. Once they have the
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ethanol
they can put it in a storage room and then ready for transportation.

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,
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ethanol
as
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fuel
. For instances here are worries about the amount of energy and land required to grow
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ethanol
feedstock crops. Even with these concerns, ethanol-based
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