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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the process of electricity production in a hydroelectric station. Overall, the procedure contains four rather simple stages. It commences, when river water from higher-level reservoir flows down through intake, which is open at midday. Following this, water reaches the chamber the chamber with reversible turbine, which is directly connected to generator, and then is made to spin. Once the turbine has begun propelling, generator then starts producing energy. Next, generated electricity is send through power lines for multipurpose usage. Having left the turbine chamber, water then flows into low-level reservoir. The next step is that, turbine starts rotating in opposite direction and the reverse process begins. Finally, at night, water is pumped up back from low-level to higher-level reservoir and this cyclic procedure happens constantly.
The diagram depicts the process of electricity production in a hydroelectric station.
Overall
, the procedure contains four
rather
simple stages.

It commences, when river
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water
from higher-level reservoir flows down through intake, which is open at midday. Following this,
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water
reaches
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the chamber the chamber
with reversible
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turbine
, which is
directly
connected to generator, and then
is made
to spin. Once the
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turbine
has begun propelling, generator then
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starts
producing

energy.
Next
, generated electricity is
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send
through power lines for multipurpose usage.

Having
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left
the
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turbine
chamber,
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water
then flows into low-level reservoir. The
next
step is that,
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turbine
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starts
rotating in opposite direction and the reverse process
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begins
.
Finally
, at night,
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water
is pumped
up back from low-level to higher-level

reservoir and this cyclic procedure happens
constantly
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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128 words
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