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Manufacturing ceramic pots

Manufacturing ceramic pots MMoWe

The diagram show that there are number of producing ceramic pots. You can see that the process comprises if eleven steps. The ingredient to make ceramic pots is raw materials are dug out of the ground by a digger. After that this materials transported by trucks to a factory to do the next steps. At the factory, the raw materials are crushed twice and when it become powder it will be mixed with the water. After that the mixture is poured into molds to form the shape of ceramic pots. After 4-6 hours the mixture in mold dried are assembled into clay pots. But it not the final step. The clay pots are putted into and oven and heated at the temperature over 1, 000 degrees celsius. Now it’s the final step, the pots are then colored by craftsman before going to color firing to become finished pots.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that there are number of producing ceramic pots.

You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the process comprises if eleven steps.

The ingredient to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 is raw materials are dug
 out of the ground by a digger. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that Did you mean "these"?these
this
 materials transported by trucks to a factory to do the next
 steps.

At the factory, the raw materials are crushed
 twice and when it Did you mean "becomes"?becomes
become
 powder it will be mixed
 with the water. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that the mixture is poured
 into molds to form the shape of ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 4-6 hours the mixture in mold dried are assembled
 into clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it not the final step. The clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are putted
 into and oven and heated at the temperature over 1, 000 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 it’s the final step, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 are then colored by craftsman This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going to color firing to become finished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. 