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The chart below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.

Opinion on accepting a crisis is always debatable. A number of people consider that accepting a situations like unhappy job or financial problems is more appropriate while others say that it is always a good practice to overcome the problems by constantly working towards achieving them. This essay will discuss why it is essential to strive hard to improve one's situation and also, the importance of neglecting and moving on a bad phase of life. To achieve something bigger it is important not to hang to the same problem because, letting go off bad situations will not only save one from being victim to depression but also helps him/her to concentrate on the brighter part of life. In contrast to this, it is equally crucial to make efforts to solve a life issue. The reason being that, we should never accept or to be more precise, an individual should not move on easily without even giving it a try. We live in a rapidly growing and competitive world. I have a neutral opinion on this topic. Hence, I would say it is always ideal for a person to decide the best option depending on the situation and execute it in an efficient manner. Great amount of dedication and being ambitious all very vital although, there might be some situations when the person might lack motivation and loose interest. To sum up everything that has been stated so far, the essay discussed the importance and the consequences of handling personal issues with a positive mind set whatever the decision might be.
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people
consider that accepting a
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situations
like unhappy job or financial problems is more appropriate while others say that it is always a
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good
practice to overcome the problems by
constantly
working towards achieving them. This essay will discuss why it is essential to strive
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hard
to
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improve
one's
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situation
and
also
, the importance of neglecting and moving on a
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bad
phase of life.

To achieve something bigger it is
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important
not to hang to the same problem
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because
, letting go off
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bad
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situations
will not
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only
save one from being victim to depression
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but
also
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helps
him/her to concentrate on the brighter part of life.
In contrast
to this, it is
equally
crucial to
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make
efforts to solve a life issue. The reason being that, we should never accept or to be more precise, an individual should not
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move
on
easily
without even giving it a try.

We
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live
in a
rapidly
growing and competitive world. I have a neutral opinion on this topic.
Hence
, I would say it is always ideal for a person to decide the best option depending on the
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situation
and execute it
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in an efficient manner
. Great amount of dedication and being ambitious all
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very
vital although, there might be
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some
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situations
when the person might lack motivation and loose interest.

To sum up everything that has
been stated
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so
far, the essay discussed the importance and the consequences of handling personal issues with a
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positive
mind set whatever the decision might be.
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IELTS academic The chart below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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