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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided image illustrates the generation of electricity in a sophisticated hydroelectric power station. Overall, the water flows from a high level to a low-level reservoir and in between a power station is set up which generates the electricity. The day operation initiates when the water from the river splashes to the constructed dam, which also acts as a barrier, then the water takes the route from the bottom of that dam. Further, the strong flow of water rotates the turbine in the power station. As the turbines move at a fast pace, the generator converts that energy into electricity through the automated process. The water from the turbine is released to the low-level reservoir. Lastly, the electricity is passed to the national grid with the help of power lines. Similarly, the power station operates at the night by reversing the day process. The pressure at low-level reservoir forces water to move back to the turbine section. Primarily, the turbine rotates in opposite direction thus injecting the water back to the upper-level reservoir. As the flow of water at night is towards the dam from the station, therefore, the whole process of power generation is reinitiated.
The provided image illustrates the generation of electricity in a sophisticated hydroelectric
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power
station.

Overall
, the
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water
flows from a high level to a low-level
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reservoir
and in between a
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power
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station
is set
up which generates the electricity.

The day operation initiates when the
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water
from the river splashes to the constructed dam, which
also
acts as a barrier, then the
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water
takes the route from the bottom of that dam.
Further
, the strong flow of
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water
rotates the
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turbine
in the
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power
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station
. As the
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turbines
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move
at a
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fast
pace, the generator converts that energy into electricity through the automated process. The
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water
from the
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turbine
is released
to the low-level
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reservoir
.
Lastly
, the electricity
is passed
to the national grid with the
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help
of
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power
lines.

Similarly
, the
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power
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station
operates at the night by reversing the day process. The pressure at low-level
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reservoir
forces
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water
to
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move
back to the
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turbine
section.
Primarily
, the
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turbine
rotates in opposite direction
thus
injecting the
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water
back to the upper-level
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reservoir
. As the flow of
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water
at night is towards the dam from the
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station
,
therefore
, the whole process of
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power
generation is
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reinitiated
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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196 words
6.0
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