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The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The displayed chart illustrates the share of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries (England and Wales) from 1981 to 2011. As an overall trend, the proportion of households in rented accommodation was greater than the percentage of households in owned accommodation during that time whereas the maximum percentage of households in owned accommodation was in 2001 and the percentage of households in rented accommodation remained the lowest. However, the largest percentage of households for rented accommodation was in 1918 while the percentage of households for owned accommodation was the minimum. Additionally, households in owned and rented accommodation owned the same proportion in 1971. In 1981 households in owned accommodation was approximately 23%. It developed to almost 32% in 1939 and in 1953 it was constant. Then, it improved significantly from about 32% to 69% between 1939 and 2001. However, it slightly dropped to about 64% in 2011. As far as households in rented accommodation are concerned, 1918 was the boom year with nearly 78% which started to drop afterward. Though it remained constant at around 68% between 1939 and 1953, it continued to go down and reached only 30% in 2001. In the year 2001, it slightly increased to around 36%.
The displayed chart illustrates the share of
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accommodation
in two countries (England and Wales) from 1981 to 2011.

As an
overall
trend, the proportion of
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households
in rented
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accommodation
was greater than the
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percentage
of
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
during that time whereas the maximum
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percentage
of
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
was in 2001 and the
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percentage
of
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households
in rented
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accommodation
remained the lowest.
However
, the largest
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percentage
of
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households
for rented
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accommodation
was in 1918 while the
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percentage
of
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households
for
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owned
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accommodation
was the minimum.
Additionally
,
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households
in
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
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owned
the same proportion in 1971.

In 1981
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
was approximately 23%. It developed to almost 32% in 1939 and in 1953 it was constant. Then, it
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improved
significantly
from about 32% to 69% between 1939 and 2001.
However
, it
slightly
dropped to about 64% in 2011.

As far as
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in rented
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accommodation
are concerned
, 1918 was the boom year with
nearly
78% which
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started
to drop afterward. Though it remained constant at around 68% between 1939 and 1953, it continued to go down and reached
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only
30% in 2001. In the year 2001, it
slightly
increased to around 36%.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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