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The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. geMg
The pie chart compare the percentage of energy from various sources such as natural gas, coal, hydrogen, nuclear, oil and other renewable in a country from 1985 to 2003. Overall, it is clear that the maximum proportion of the energy was made from oil. While, hydrogen and other renewable had show showed minimum production in given years. Also, the energy production from coal, natural gas and other renewable increased and oil or nuclear source decreased in the given time period. In detail, in the 1985, the energy produced by oil was more than half. The energy production from nuclear was 22%. While, other renewable was 1% and natural gas was 13%. The energy production from the coal and hydrogen were 8%, 4%. On the other hand, in 2003, the production from oil and nuclear were decreased. Whereas, the energy production from other renewable, coal and natural gas were increased they were 4%, 13% and 23%. Finally, the energy production from hydrogen was remained the same at 4%.
The pie chart compare the percentage of
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energy
from various sources such as
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natural
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gas
, coal, hydrogen, nuclear,
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oil
and
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other
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renewable
in a country from 1985 to 2003.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the maximum proportion of the
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energy
was made
from
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oil
. While, hydrogen and
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other
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renewable
had
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show
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showed
minimum
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production
in
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given
years.
Also
, the
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energy
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production
from coal,
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natural
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gas
and
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other
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renewable
increased and
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oil
or nuclear source decreased in the
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given
time period.

In detail, in the 1985, the
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energy
produced by
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oil
was more than half. The
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energy
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production
from nuclear was 22%. While,
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other
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renewable
was 1% and
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natural
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gas
was 13%. The
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energy
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production
from the coal and hydrogen were 8%, 4%.

On the
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other
hand, in 2003, the
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production
from
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oil
and nuclear
were decreased
. Whereas, the
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energy
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production
from
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other
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renewable
, coal and
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natural
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gas
were increased
they were 4%, 13% and 23%.
Finally
, the
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energy
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production
from hydrogen
was remained
the same at 4%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

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