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the diagram below shows how chewing gum is made

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The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of chewing gum. Overall, it is clear that there are six stages in this progress, starting from melting the gum and ending with packaging the gum. At the first stage of the process, the pieces of gum are put into a container and melted into one single mass. Then, this is strained to eliminate all the liquid. The next step begins the gum is moved to another container and flavourings, softeners, and sweeteners are added. After that, the mixture is blended. The following step is when the gum is sent to a different machine, which uses rollers to straighten to the gum. Coming to the final stages of the process, the sheet of gum is cut into a rectangular shape and broken into separate pieces. Finally, the pieces of gum travel along with conveyor bells where they are packaged and ready for distribution.
The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of chewing gum.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are six stages in this progress, starting from melting the
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gum
and ending with packaging the gum.

At the
first
stage of the process, the pieces of
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gum
are put
into a container and melted into one single mass. Then, this
is strained
to eliminate all the liquid. The
next
step
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begins
the
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gum
is
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moved
to another container and
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flavourings
, softeners, and sweeteners are
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added
. After that, the mixture
is blended
.

The following step is when the
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gum
is
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sent
to a
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different
machine, which
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uses
rollers to straighten to the
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gum
. Coming to the final stages of the process, the sheet of
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gum
is
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cut
into a rectangular shape and broken into separate pieces.
Finally
, the pieces of
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gum
travel along with conveyor bells where they
are packaged
and ready for distribution.
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154 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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