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wealthy nation provided to share to poor nation for food and education

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In this world there are nation that wealthy and poor. The rich country frequently give providing food and education to poor country. This is good idea. This things called humanity. Not all country can provide what the public need by themselves. They need help from other country. Atleast for the forst step to grow. This things can we call about humanity, maintain international relationship and balancing the world. The first reason is humanity for helping each other. Most of poor country has bad education. They can not provide or control the their nation resources because of the limited knowledge. The help from nation that have good education can be great idea. They give scholarship and give chance to people from poor country to school in their country. So the knowledge and experience can aplicate in their caountry. The poor country can provide food and another what they needs. The second thing is to maintain international colaboration. We are social creature and can not stand by alone. I think the poor country has things that wealth country dont have. This kind of things can be mutual relationship. There are not countries that perfect that can only lived by them self. The last reason is balancing for the world. We live in the world need equality. The equality include the circumantances all countries. If the gap lives among countries too wide the earth will give signal. The signal like anomali weather, climate changes, etc. So the balance things are very important. Alternatively, the poor condition is responsibility of the goverment of the poorer nations. The condiotion of the poorer country can not be grow for the first step if the other can not help. Maybe they can grow by themselve but need times. I agree the wealthy nation share their resources to help the poor countries. The humanity to helping each other, to strength relationship and for balancing the earth.
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that wealthy and
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frequently
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give
providing food and education to
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poor
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humanity
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can provide what the public
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need
by themselves. They
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need
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help
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country
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things can we call about
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humanity
, maintain international relationship and balancing the world.

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first
reason is
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humanity
for helping each
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poor
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country
has
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education. They can not provide or control the their
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resources
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education can be great
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scholarship and
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country
can provide food and another what they
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creature and can not stand by alone. I
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has things that wealth
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equality. The equality
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weather, climate
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the wealthy
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share their resources to
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IELTS academic wealthy nation provided to share to poor nation for food and education

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