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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram describes a non-conventional futuristic method to make energy at home on our own. Overall, the energy production process consists of seven key stages, beginning with composting of organic waste and ending with supplying of electricity for domestic purpose. First of all, discarded organic waste such as leaves, food, scraps, etc along with water are filled in a steel tank such that they occupy three-fourth of the space. Then, fermentation is allowed which releases methane gas which is collected by means of pipes in a methane gas chamber. Further, the gas is passed through a compressor to allow its volume reduction and subsequently the compressed gas is sent to a combustion engine. In the next stage, combustion engine converts compressed gas into mechanical energy which is sent to a generator which produces electrical energy. Lastly, electricity is stored in a battery and according to requirement electric supply is provided to houses.
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diagram
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describes
a non-conventional futuristic method to
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make
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energy
at home on our
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own
.

Overall
, the
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energy
production process consists of seven key stages, beginning with composting of organic waste and ending with supplying of electricity for domestic purpose.

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First of all
, discarded organic waste such as
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leaves
, food, scraps, etc along with water
are filled
in a steel tank such that they occupy three-fourth of the space. Then, fermentation is
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allowed
which releases methane
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gas
which
is collected
by means of pipes in a methane
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gas
chamber.
Further
, the
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gas
is passed
through a compressor to
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allow
its volume reduction and
subsequently
the compressed
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gas
is
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sent
to a combustion engine.

In the
next
stage, combustion engine converts compressed
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gas
into mechanical
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energy
which is
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sent
to a generator which produces electrical
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energy
.
Lastly
, electricity
is stored
in a battery and according to requirement electric supply
is provided
to
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houses
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

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153 words
6.5
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