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the diagram below show the process for making potato crisps

the diagram below show the process for making potato crisps wK02E
The figure illustrates a production line of manufacturing potato chips in a factory. Overall, to become the crisps, the potatoes undergo an almost automatic process including six main stages: sifting, washing, slicing, frying, seasoning and packing. In that, there is only a step with the intervention of workers where they select the high quality potatoes. The process begins once the workers carefully handpick the potatoes to ensure they are in the good quality. The potatoes are then tumbled into a washer which is filled by cold rinse water to get rid of dirt. After that, they are moved to a peeler to peel their skin and starch. Next, they are placed on a bucket conveyor which supplies the resulting potatoes one by one to the slicer. The slicer machine cuts the potatoes into small slices, and then these slices are put on a automated flat bed conveyor which go through jets of air to make the slices dry. In the fourth stages, the slices are deep fried in oil by a fryer, after which the fried potato slices leave this machine on a flat belt conveyor. At the fifth stage, these fried potato slices are seasoned with salt by a salter before being packaged by the bag packer and bulk can filler in the final step
The figure illustrates a production line of manufacturing
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potato
chips in a factory.

Overall
, to become the crisps, the
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potatoes
undergo an almost automatic process including six main stages: sifting, washing, slicing, frying, seasoning and packing. In that, there is
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only
a step with the intervention of workers where they select the high quality potatoes.

The process
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begins
once the workers
carefully
handpick the
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potatoes
to ensure they are in the
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good
quality. The
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potatoes
are then tumbled into a washer which
is filled
by
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cold
rinse water to
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get
rid of dirt. After that, they are
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moved
to a peeler to peel their skin and starch.
Next
, they
are placed
on a bucket conveyor which supplies the resulting
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potatoes
one by one to the slicer. The slicer machine
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cuts
the
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potatoes
into
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small
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slices
, and then these
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slices
are put
on
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a
automated flat bed conveyor which go through jets of air to
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make
the
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slices
dry. In the fourth stages, the
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slices
are
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deep fried
in oil by a fryer, after which the fried
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potato
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slices
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leave
this machine on a flat belt conveyor. At the fifth stage, these fried
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potato
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slices
are seasoned
with salt by a salter
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before
being packaged
by the bag packer and bulk can filler in the final
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