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causes of worldwide land degradation

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The pie chart shows us why the agriculture land has become. Less productive, and how it and how it affected the three regions, namely, north America, Europe, Oceania. Overall, the most region that got affected was Europe and the least affected was north America. In 1990 the north America was affected by deforestation only 0. 2% where in Europe it got affected by 9. 8 %, and 1. 7 in Oceania. As for the over-cultivation in north America affected the land by 3. 3. and 7. 7 in Europe, it did not affect Oceania at all. the most region that got affected by overgrazing was Oceania with 11. 3 % followed by Europe with a 5. 5 effect, and the least effected was north America with 1. 5%. the results of the total land degraded showed us that the most affected region was Europe with a total of 23% and second affected was Oceania with 13 % and least effected was north America with a total pf 5 %.

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