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The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time.

The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time. DNgBk
The assigned pictorial representation illustrate the information about a distribution of a school in 1985 and changes that are look in the present time. Overall, it is noticable that the distribution of a school is expected to witnessed a sea change in the incoming time. Looking at the details it is abundantly clear that as far as the past time is concerned. There was a rectangle car park located in north side. Road was situated behind the car park. The school had a square car park, office and library in the left side, whereas two stores classroom block were in the right side.
The assigned pictorial representation illustrate the information about a distribution of a school in 1985 and
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changes
that are look in the present time.
Overall
, it is
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noticable
that the distribution of a school is
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expected
Did you mean "to witness"?
to witnessed
a sea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the incoming time. Looking at the
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details
it is
abundantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that as far as the
Did you mean "pastime"?
past time
is concerned
. There was a rectangle car park located in north side. Road
was situated
behind the car park. The school had a square car park, office and library in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side, whereas two stores classroom block were
The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?
in the right side
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time.

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1 paragraphs
103 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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