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The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time.

The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time. DNgBk

The assigned pictorial representation illustrate the information about a distribution of a school in 1985 and changes that are look in the present time. Overall, it is noticable that the distribution of a school is expected to witnessed a sea change in the incoming time. Looking at the details it is abundantly clear that as far as the past time is concerned. There was a rectangle car park located in north side. Road was situated behind the car park. The school had a square car park, office and library in the left side, whereas two stores classroom block were in the right side.

The assigned pictorial representation illustrate the information about a distribution of a school in 1985 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that are look in the present time. Overall
, it is Possible spelling mistake found.noticeable
noticable
 that the distribution of a school is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
Did you mean "to witness"?to witness
to witnessed
 a sea This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the incoming time. Looking at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 it is abundantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that as far as the Did you mean "pastime"?pastime
past time
is concerned
. There was a rectangle car park located in north side. Road was situated
 behind the car park. The school had a square car park, office and library in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side, whereas two stores classroom block were The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?on the right side
in the right side
. 

IELTS academic The diagram below show the map of a school in 1985 and the changes that have taken place till the present time.

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

103 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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