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THE DIAGRAM below show changes that have taken place in the sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

THE DIAGRAM below show changes that have taken place in the sawry district between 1920 and 2020. ok3nw
The two maps present the development occurs in sawery district from 1920 to 2020. overall, in swary district, yang office complex was replaced by Tulebug Bros. furthermore, the bridge was constructed and connected with roads. The Miller's lake remained at its orginial place in South west corner. Turning to details, in 1920, in the north side of district their was a river and a river in 2020, new bridge was erected over it and bridge was connected with road which run towards oak avenue the main road. In west side in 1920, tulebury bros. company and later in 2021 it had been demolished and yang office complex was planted. Moreover, in the east side of district, in 1920, the three house and one road connected to main road. In 2020, two houses remained only and opposite building had been introduced. However, where the houses, shops, and prestwich primary school in 1920, and later on in 2020, prestwich primary school was replaced by lonoco petrol station and school was moved from its original place to the south side and ares was enlarged. The two apartments, two shops and three houses had been opened up along the oak avenue. In south west corner millers lake remained at the same position.
The two maps present the development occurs in
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sawery
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district
from 1920 to 2020.

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overall
, in
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swary
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district
, yang office complex
was replaced
by
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Tulebug
Bros.
furthermore
, the bridge
was constructed
and connected with
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roads
. The Miller's lake remained at its
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orginial
place in South west corner.

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details
, in 1920, in the north side of
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district
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their
was a river and a river in 2020, new bridge
was erected
over it and bridge
was connected
with
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road
which run towards oak avenue the main
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road
. In west side in 1920,
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tulebury
bros.
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company
and later in 2021 it had
been demolished
and yang office complex
was planted
.
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, in the east side of
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district
, in 1920, the three
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house
and one
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road
connected to main
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road
. In 2020, two
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houses
remained
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only
and opposite building had
been introduced
.

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, where the
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houses
, shops, and
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prestwich
primary school in 1920, and later on in 2020,
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prestwich
primary school
was replaced
by
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lonoco
petrol station and school was
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moved
from its original place to the south side and ares
was enlarged
. The two apartments, two shops and three
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houses
had
been opened
up along the oak avenue. In
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south west
corner millers lake remained at the same position.
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IELTS academic THE DIAGRAM below show changes that have taken place in the sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

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