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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. N1Ld

The table chart shows the numbers of cars produced in Argentina, Australia and Thailand, in the three years 2003, 2006 and 2009. Overall, except from Argentina other two countries had seen a decline a production of cars over a period. The cars production in Thailand was 787, 000 in 2003 was inclined to 1, 180, 000 in 2006 and was declined to 999, 879 in 2009. Followingly, Australia had seen a decline production of cars over a period was 538, 000 in 2003 which was fell down to 345, 000 in 2006 and in 2009 the production was nearly a half of 2003, which is 225, 000. Argentina is the only country which shown a incline in a period which was 166, 000 in 2003, which had a significant growth to 420, 000 in 2006 and it touches to 510, 000 cars at the end of the period.

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