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The diagram above shows the process of milk, butter and cheese production.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words

The diagram above shows the process of milk, butter and cheese production. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. 3Y22l

The diagram shows the various stages of producing milk, butter and cheese. This is a complicated process and it has 8 basic steps. The process begins with cows on the farm, and it ends with milk, cheese and butter in the supermarkets and shops. In terms of the processes on the farm, firstly, cows graze grass and they turn that grass into milk. Secondly, these cows are milked by a milking machine twice a day, after which the milk is put into refrigeration storage in order to keep it cool. Next, the milk is collected by a milk tanker each day and delivered to a dairy factory. Looking at what happens at the dairy factory, the milk is either processed for eating or for drinking. If it is for drinking, the milk is pasteurized, packaged into bottles and finally delivered to supermarkets and shops for people to buy and use. If it is for eating, then it is made into cheese, cream and butter. These items are also sent to supermarkets and shops, where people can buy them.

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shows
 the various stages of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, butter and cheese. This is a complicated process and it has 8 basic steps. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with cows on the farm, and it ends with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, cheese and butter in the supermarkets and shops.

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, cows graze Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).grass, and
grass and
 they turn that grass into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
. Secondly
, these cows are milked
 by a milking machine twice a day, after which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is put
 into refrigeration storage in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it cool. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is collected
 by a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 tanker each day and delivered to a dairy factory.

Looking at what happens at the dairy factory, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is either processed for eating or for drinking. If it is for drinking, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is pasteurized
, packaged into bottles and finally
 delivered to supermarkets and shops for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. If it is for eating, then it is made
 into cheese, cream and butter. These items are also
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sent
 to supermarkets and shops, where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them. 