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The development of the village

The development of the village JLNQ0
the map shows how the village has been developed over the last twenty-seven years. The most noticeable change has occurred in accommodations and the decrease of nature. In 1995, There are several houses located along the street in the northwest of the village. There is the farmland to the north-east of the village with the forest park to the south of the farm. From the village to the town, the street was separated into two ways. The first one directs to the south west and there are a bunch of shops and fish market. The second street leads to the south east which is the location of the hotel in the opposite with the cafe. the village located beside the river with the fishing port extended from the land. Move to present, the number of housing has increased. There is an extention of the road in between 'houses area with the rise of household beside the new street. The farmland was developed as golf field and the forest path was flat tend to make a tennis court. In the south, the shop was modernised to the restuarants and fish market wars changed to the apartments. The hotel still located in the same place but was extended the car park to the east of the building. The cafe is the only place that have no development. and the fishing port was demolished.
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the
map
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shows
how the
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village
has
been developed


over the last twenty-seven years. The most noticeable

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change
has occurred in accommodations and the

decrease of nature.

In 1995, There are several
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houses
located along

the
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street
in the northwest of the
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village
. There

is the farmland to the north-east of the village

with the forest park to the south of the farm.

From the
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village
to the town, the
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street
was separated


into two ways. The
first
one directs to the
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south west


and there are a bunch of shops and fish market.

The second
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street
leads to the
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south east
which is

the location of the hotel in the opposite with the
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cafe
.

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the
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village
located beside the river with the fishing

port extended from the land.

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Move
to present, the number of housing has increased.

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extention
of the road in between '
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houses
area

with the rise of household beside the new
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street
. The

farmland
was developed
as golf field and the forest

path was flat tend to
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make
a tennis court. In

the south, the shop was
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modernised
to the
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restuarants


and fish market wars
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changed
to the apartments.

The hotel
still
located in the same place
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but
was extended
the car park to the east of the building.

The
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cafe
is the
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only
place that have no development.

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and
the fishing port
was demolished
.
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231 words
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