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Visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012 – Bar chart

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The given bar graph compares visitors to three museums in London from the time period of 2007 to 2012. Generally speaking, in 2012, the two most attractive places were National Gallery and the British museums. However, Victoria and Albert Museum were more popular in the initial years. As per the data, National Gallery acquired the least number of visitors, roughly 6 million, in 2007. However, by 2012, the number of visitors gradually increased to make it the most visited museum in London. In the said year, approximately 16 million people visited National Gallery. In 2007, Victoria and Albert Museum saw the largest number of visitors, accounting for nearly 13 million. For two consecutive years, 2007 and 2008, it remained the most acknowledged touristy place among the three. However, its popularity sharply declined afterwards. From 2010 to 2012, the museum managed to attract only a few spectators; thereby, standing at the last position. Lastly, the British Museum turned out to be the second most famous museum during 2007 with almost 12 million visitors. However, in the next three subsequent years, the number declined to a great extent. In 2011, it was the most visited museum in London. The next year, it dropped down to the second most toured place with nearly 14 million visitants.

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